Thursday 1 August 2019

Writing argument

This week I was given a task to write a argument about should or should not animals be kept in zoos. This is what I have created, hope you enjoy.


Should animals be in zoos? 
I strongly believe animals should be kept in zoos because Zoos save endangered species by bringing them into a safe environment, where they are protected from poachers, habitat, 
and loss of starvation Many zoos also have breeding programs for endangered species which will save endangered animals from becoming extinct.

Animals are mostly dying from diseases and being hunted but in a zoo they are always being fed and are being well looked after. They are also getting helpful injections that save them from all sorts of diseases 


It is also educating the public on animals and scientists can also study the way they live and how their bodies work and can improve or help the way they live in the wild  it will also inspire people to protect animals and their habitat. 


Overall I think zoos are a great thing because they are well looked after and also saves endangered species and have a great place to stay in a zoo.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Elijah. ItÅ› Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I really like what you have written. I agree with it as well. Next time I think you should try to ad some more colour. Apart from that it is really good.

    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.