Thursday 4 July 2019

Cell phone

This week we had to create an argument on should kids under the age of thirteen have cellphones. This is what I created. Enjoy.
                   Cell phones 


I strongly believe kids under the age of thirteen should not have cell phones
because it kills the bonding time between parents and their kids.  
It is also easy for them to get addicted. And also be exposed to violence in
games and they will soon repeat it in the real world  and through cyberbullying
on instagram facebook and all sorts of other apps. Also according to experts
amongst the causes of depression and anorexia in kids all over the world  is
the use of the smartphone and connection to the internet . Since through it
kids are bullied and often unsupervised, there is a negative impact on their
mental health

Also phones can also be easily hacked and information is sent across the
web but the worst thing is that they can easily get cyberbullied and causes
depression which makes them want to kill themselves or commit suiside they
will also become independent and will completely shut everyone out.  all
screens, even small tiny skreens can disrupt your sleep and kids need sleep A
lot of sleep. Because they're growing, and also because they become obnoxious
jerks when they haven't slept enough.

Third Health your children's health will be misplaced and is that really something
you want as a parent your job is to make your child be the best they can be but with
a phone involved it is killing their brain. Lastly is Communication a good excuse for
a phone  no it is not if this is the excuse your child is using it’s a bad excuse. I find
it is easier to communicate with someone in real life and not texting on a small
screen in the 1900s children didn’t have phones then so why should we have the
now? And in the 1900s they found a way to communicate with friends so we can too
so yeah I think kids under the age of thirteen should not have phones.









1 comment:

  1. Hi Elijah, its Jake here from T4. I like your writing on cell phones. I do agree with you on that we should have cell phones at school. I think we should be able to have them at school so we can contact our friends.
    Why did you choose this topic to write about?
    See Ya

    Jake

    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.