This week our teacher had given us a task to create and set out a play. So far my group and I have created our characters and started to create the lines that each characters are saying our theme of our play is around rugby players at a half time breke. I am hoping to put it up very soon and show you what we have created.
hope you will.
Hi there Elijah, my name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School. I'm excited to see the play.
ReplyDeleteI really like that you talked about your play now instead of when you post the video. It would give a different effect to your blog.
This reminds me of the pantomime my class is doing. A pantomime is kind of like a play that's why it reminded me of what you are doing.
Next time you could add more color or something exciting like a sneak peek into what will happen in the play.
Are you excited to show your play?
Kind regards,
Abby.
Thank you for your feed back Abby. I will try my best to add more colour thank you.
DeleteKia Ora,
ReplyDeleteI'm Grace a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
I really like this blog post because you explain what you are doing.
I also like how you put a little taste out what you are going to do,
This reminded me because we have to do the panto play, it kind of is the same because its a play but different stories.
To improve you could of add some more detail and about and make add more detailed words to make people hooked.
Apart from that its great
Kind regards -
Grace
Hello there Elijah!
ReplyDeleteI'm Mika, a year 8 from Yalhdurst Model School. Your play sounds pretty interesting. I wonder how they are going to pull of a rugby play. Also, like how your paragraph was simple and short.
In Rimu, we are doing a play called the Panto Pandemunioum. I've seen lots of kids doing the same thing so you might have heard of it before. There's a lot of singing involved and even the audience is part of the play. I'm the good fairy who's the only 2 characters who has a solo. I hope my sining would be fine... The other character with a solo is the witch who's obviously the villan.
I like how your paragraoh is simple but adding some more colour to your blog would help a lot. Using websites like Bitable, canva, or even just using slides would help. That's it for me.
Who do you want to be? I hope to see your creation.
By Mika
Link to blog:http://ymsmika.blogspot.com/