This week for literary Mrs Clark gave us a picture of two
boats and we had to write a disruptive story using verbs
nouns adverbs and additives and make a story about the
pitcher .I really enjoyed doing this activity it was really
fun considering it was school work.
boats and we had to write a disruptive story using verbs
nouns adverbs and additives and make a story about the
pitcher .I really enjoyed doing this activity it was really
fun considering it was school work.
WALT: Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers
Adjectives
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Nouns
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Adverbs
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verbs
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broken
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War
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loudly
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Crashing
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Abandoned
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Land
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Silent
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Sunken
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Wood
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whispering
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Smashed
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My paragraph
One horrible day it was world war one with ships all around broken
abandoned with planes crashing loudly. Your lucky if you even made it to
land one day it is loud and the next it's dead silent with people rotting and
it's only been a week and while you walk thro the forest you can hear the dead
whispering telling you to run hide And most commonly !!! LEAV !!! grand dad
is this all true yes do you know who the that was in the story who ME the END.
abandoned with planes crashing loudly. Your lucky if you even made it to
land one day it is loud and the next it's dead silent with people rotting and
it's only been a week and while you walk thro the forest you can hear the dead
whispering telling you to run hide And most commonly !!! LEAV !!! grand dad
is this all true yes do you know who the that was in the story who ME the END.
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